Judge’s favorite line:
“Like I didn’t know he was a weak swimmer.”
Judge’s feedback, which for me says that I should keep writing (after all, practice will one day produce a bestselling crime novel, haha!):
Twists the story’s direction towards a deadly intent: made my scalp tingle.
Song title: I’ll Never Fall in Love Again
Setting: Sunwa River Lodge, Parys, Free State
IF ONLY FOR TODAY
I must be insane to say I’ll never fall in love again. I’ll probably feel differently tomorrow. Maybe.
Continue reading here: If only for today