The spring in your walk
Your laughing, cheerful chatter
Dwindled till empty
As fall faded to winter
Except not temporary
…
A hollow vessel
Remained, with your soul stolen
Honest, he was not
© 2019 Anna Jailene Aguilar
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The spring in your walk
Your laughing, cheerful chatter
Dwindled till empty
As fall faded to winter
Except not temporary
…
A hollow vessel
Remained, with your soul stolen
Honest, he was not
© 2019 Anna Jailene Aguilar
This is very nice, lovely tone and mood at the start and then that feeling of sadness toward the end comes through. Nice!
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Thank you, Theresa. Your feedback is always important to me. You have so much knowledge to go with your passion. Thanks so much! 🤗❤
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